User talk:Danko/Claire's Victims

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I left this message on my talk page, but I'll copy it here, too, since it's relevant to this page. There are quite a few things that need to be changed on this page so it stylistically meets the standards of Heroes Wiki. For instance, the title shouldn't be capitalized. You've got an empty section that doesn't need to be there, which also means that the "Other Victims" subheading can be removed. You have sentences with no periods. "After going after" sounds awkward. You need to work on some of your antecedents. -- RyanGibsonStewart (talk) 17:30, 8 June 2009 (EDT)